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> Seikūken [Control of the Air Sphere]
Chocobocharm
 Posted: Jun 9 2018, 07:31 AM
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Extra Sense: Seikūken [Control of the Air Sphere]
Description: Genji has some strange sense that acts as a barometric pressure sense. This sense involves a short ranged radius around her.
Benefit: Detect any movement and change of pressure within the small area of effect.
Cost: 7

Trait Type: A
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Chocobocharm
 Posted: Jun 9 2018, 07:34 AM
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This was a trait I custom made for my last character and it was labeled a Elite Level Trait. From what I saw Elite was B rank since on my old additions profile my character was Genin and you could only add one trait one rank higher than yourself. Is that still the case?


http://worldofninja.jcink.net/index.php?sh...l=Seik%C5%ABken


Edit: Would this be better as the base for a fighting style since that's where it came from? Can a fighting style give an enhanced sense? http://kenichi.wikia.com/wiki/Seik%C5%ABken

Personally I think it would be better as a fighting style.
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N tha Darth
 Posted: Jun 9 2018, 08:56 AM
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So first off, B traits are 4 points. Then again it does seem much more accurate than the other B ranked traits which mostly provide a "feeling" or sensation that either the surroundings have been altered, or about impending doom. I do however see that you did put a huge range cap.

Well when you say it "creates a spherical shield," it feels like a jutsu. And a jutsu being the basis for a fighting style makes perfect sense, there's one such case in existence at least, I think.

And to my knowledge, there is no rule saying you can't have more than one trait ranking above your rank.
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Chocobocharm
 Posted: Jun 10 2018, 09:06 AM
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I thought B rank were 3 points, 1 point per rank.

Not really a jutsu as this is constant and is a pressure sense, it's just a short ranged one. I just wasn't sure if it'd be better as a fighting style or not.
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 Posted: Jun 10 2018, 09:55 AM
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You know, I don't know how it could be a fighting style. But I understand your concept of a pressure sense.

D -1, C -2, B -4, A -7, S -10. But yeah I'll just leave this for a mod .
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 Posted: Jun 11 2018, 04:43 AM
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While this can be passable as a trait, it might be better off as a Fighting Style, in my opinion.

However, if you are able to reword the description to better fit the Benefit that you have written, it 'caaan' work as a trait. Mainly the last part.

We'll see how it goes.

Something like once something enters an arm's length's distance away from you, your Agility points increases by 10, + or something like that. (as a Fighting Style)

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Chocobocharm
 Posted: Jun 12 2018, 04:18 PM
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Updated it to just being a pressure sense and extended the range to something more than just arms length. This is kinda like what birds use to sense air currents coming at them and around them.
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 Posted: Jun 14 2018, 10:03 AM
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Approved.

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