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> [Bloodline] Seishin Goei (Spirit Guard)
iceshadow40
 Posted: Nov 27 2017, 08:11 PM
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Name: Seishin Goei (Spirit Guard)

Clan/Organization: Ichitori Clan

Bloodline History: The Seishin Goei is a technique that dates back to the founding members of the Ichitori clan. Following a shamanistic way of life, the clan strove to maintain a strong relationship with the spirits of nature and life. When their village was threatened by conflict, the clan began to meditate on ways to defeat the enemy. One member in particular, Jirou Ichitori, had a very strong connection with the spirits. As Jirou meditated one day, he was able to reached out to the spirit of creation. The spirit, impressed with Jirou’s affinity for reaching them and his determination to defend his loved ones, granted Jirou and his clan the ability to summon a part of their soul as a method to defeat the invaders.

Jirou then gathered all of the able bodied clan members to demonstrate the newly acquired ability they had been gifted with. Focusing on manifesting his soul into a physical form, the form of a bear with a fiery red aura appeared instantly beside the summoner. Amazed by the power of the gift, the rest of the clan began to pour their souls into manifesting their summons. As each member successfully completed the summon, they each manifested various beasts.

Description: This bloodline gives the user the ability to summon a spirit beast that is linked to them eternally. They are able to summon anything without the use of a blood sacrifice or even hand seals. Their affinity with summoning strengthens the creatures they summon and deepens their bond with their own spirit beast. Able to recall their beast from great distances despite being separated. Each man and woman who exhibit the ability to be a true summoner have part of their hair permanently changed to the color of their beast element. This change was so strong that even dying the hair proved futile and always overtook the dye and in some rare cases even through henge.

Their mastery over the Summoning Arts leads them to be quite a hassle to keep down.


Seishin Goei (Spirit Guard):

Description: There is only one stage of Seishin Goei. The user is able to mentally summon any beast with ease. They are able to summon a special spirit that grows in strength as the user does. They are able to transport the spirit back to their side by paying an additional chakra cost. The spirit beast and the user have a profound connection and are able to locate each other via mental link as well as communicate with each other telepathically.

The spirit beast though born from the user's soul holds its own personality. When the spirit is first born it takes on the shape of the user's will, mostly how they perceive their soul. In few cases some summoners have created mythical beast. Its not unheard of for the spirit to be born older than the summoner. Once created the beast is that shape forever though it may grow in size as it ages.

Flavor: The spirits refer to each other as brother and sister inspite of meeting each other for the first time.

Activation: The user focuses their chakra at a location close to them, and summons forth their spirit. This takes very little concentration.

Requirements: 2 weeks of meditation after one has dreamed of being called out to by a spirit.


Strengths:
-Able to summon without blood sacrifice or hand seals. Its all mental.
-Every 2 Ninja Point, a user obtains after the base amount the spirit gains 1 for use.
-Able to call summons back to the users side with additional use of chakra from any distance (determined by current rank)
-The user and spirit guard are able to communicate mentally.
-The user and spirit guard know where each other are and how far at all times.
-Special unique abilities per rank of the Spirit's rank that cannot be taught by any means.

Weakness: -The greater the distance between the spirit and the user reduces their attributes by 5% for every 100ft they are from the user. After they have reached 100% reduction the spirit beast will instantly unsummon.

Limitations:
-The Spirit Can not be a higher rank than the user.
- Every Summons that is not the spirit guard, their cost is determined as normal outside of this bloodline.

Costs:
1 Advanced Ability Point per rank.
Cost for Spirit
D Rank- 10 Chakra
C Rank- 20 Chakra
B Rank- 40 Chakra
A Rank- 80 Chakra
S Rank- 160 Chakra

Transplant Costs: N/A

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 Posted: Dec 1 2017, 03:28 AM
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Activation: The user focuses their chakra at a location close to them, and summons forth their spirit. This is a passive ability


The bolded things contradict each other. A Passive ability is one you don't have to think about to be active. If you have to actually take effort, however minor, to make it work right, it isn't passive.

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-Able to summon without blood sacrifice or hand seals


Do they still need to take any kind of physical movement, or can the just summon something without moving?

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1 Advanced Ability Point per rank.
D Rank- 10 Chakra
C Rank- 20 Chakra
B Rank- 40 Chakra
A Rank- 80 Chakra
S Rank- 160 Chakra


Is this cost for summoning the spirit beast?


Also, does the spirit beast still require an application? Does it have a personality, or is it an extension of the user? Does it follow rules regarding mythical things, or can it take on any shape? Is it always the same shape?

Basically, can you describe the spirit beast itself a bit more?

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iceshadow40
 Posted: Dec 1 2017, 11:09 AM
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Done. Made edits and added a bit of flavor.

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 Posted: Dec 1 2017, 11:48 PM
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4 questions from me for the time being:

Does the concentration scale as the rank of the spirit does?

Since utilizing this essentially takes no effort on the user (no movement), does it mean you can summon this and something else simultaneously?

Are the costs for summoning and for the recall? I know it says it's determined by the rank, but I wanted to clarify that.

It mentions special abilities can't be taught, but does that include Jutsu. And if it does, how it function against things like Sharingan and other things that allow stealing of techs and abilities, even if temporarily?

And not really a question, but I'd like to default to BB's thoughts on the NP scaling for the spirit.


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iceshadow40
 Posted: Dec 2 2017, 01:00 AM
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1. Yes the concentration does scale.
2. You can summon something simultaneously yes.
3. The cost are for both yes.
4. the Special abilities aren't jutsu, so no it wouldn't be able to be copied.

As for the scaling np. It does scale. for each rank of the BL its one additional AA.

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Nephilim
 Posted: Dec 2 2017, 02:23 AM
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Alright, so talked to Zau and the only real concern left is the 1:1 scaling NP gain. Instead of 1:1, it would be better if it we're a every 2 bonus the spirit gets 1

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 Posted: Dec 2 2017, 02:37 AM
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Sure fixed and done


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 Posted: Dec 2 2017, 07:02 AM
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Approved.

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