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> [C-rank Rogue] Okinawa, Fetu, Place holder please wait
Kagemaru
 Posted: Jan 24 2018, 08:39 PM
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Biographical Information


Name: Okinawa, Fetu

Clan: Okinawa Clan

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Ninja Status: Ninja

Rank: C-rank rogue

Height: 4'11

Weight: 95 lbs

Description: Fetu is a thin boy of bronze skin, and brown shoulder length silky hair, with emerald colored eyes. He has tribal tattoos all over his body from his neck down to his ankles. He typically wears a white V-neck shirt, and black shorts with black ninja sandles. His ninja tool belt is strapped to his side at all times carrying his necessities. He has a sharks tooth tied around his neck, and sea shells on a string tied around his left wrist.

Personality: Fetu is a calm passionate boy, he's peaceful minded, and a go with the flow type. Typically he strays from making decisions unless it solely has to be on him. During battle his persona changes to survive at all costs, and protect those he's charged with. Mostly though he's live and let live.

Background Fetu was born the son of a merchant sailor, and a pirate mother. His mother lived and died by the sea. When he was born he was left with his father in Shimigakure. He was raised to make an honest living amongst his clan members of the Okinawa. When he was 6 he discovered his natural talents with Suiton, and Doton elements. He began practicing Ninjutsu learning it from his father. His father would take him out to the ocean and play with him while at the same time training him, he wasnt anticipating him becoming a ninja but more so taught him these things to survive. He was raised to believe that his mother was dead, bur discovered itherwise years later.

When he was 8 his father became ill, sickened by an uncommon virus, the doctors didnt give him much hope for survival. Fetu, wanting to save his fathers life, hit the books and began learning medicine so he could take care of his father and hopefully find a cure. Unfortunately time was not on his side. His father layed on his death bed and finally confessed to him that his mother was still alive belonging to a infamous pirate crew called the “White Lamb”.

Upon his fathers death Fetu decided he needed to search for his mother but survival as his father taught him was key. So he started at the ninja academy to learn more, already capable of performing minor medical ninjutsu he excelled rather quickly. His chakra control was well above others but his maturity for that matter was barely on par with those of his age. Fetu didnt graduate the academy until he was 11, still a bit young in some opinions but he was talented, and proved himself more than worthy.

Fetu decided not to stick around the Village much longer, having gained the necessary skill he didnt accept Genin rank and instead decided to be a mercenary, and begin his search for his mother. Now he wonders the lands in searh of work, to gain money for a ship and to gain his mothers attention.

Combat Information


Available Ninja Points:

Inventory: [5 lbs]
5 Kunai [5 lbs]
Medical Kit [Gauze, Ointment, bandages, band aids big and small] [not encumbered]

Inventory Ninja Points: 0

Traits:
First Aid
Description: The user has received very basic training as a field medic, allowing them to administer basic medical supplies to those in need.
Benefit: Basic medical supplies such as bandages and ointment don’t encumber the user

Trait Ninja Points: 1

Attributes:

Strength: 15
Speed: 15 [14]
Agility: 25 [24]
Perception: 15
Endurance: 10
Willpower: 10
Spirituality: 25
Stamina: 20

Attribute Ninja Points: 27

Chakra: 370

Skills:

Strike Power:
Grapple:
Strike Speed:
Blocking Power:
Chakra Manipulation:40
Shape Transformation:
Nature Transformation:
Creativity:
Focus:
Resilience:
Immersion:
Bladed Weapons:
Other Weapons:
Ranged Weapons:
Chakra Control:40(8%)
Enhanced Sense (Enter Sense):
Enhanced Sense (Enter Sense):
Enhanced Sense (Enter Sense):
Concentration:40
Medical Knowledge:10
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Skill Ninja Points: 13

Chakra Natures:
Suiton [Water], Doton [Earth] Sangoton [Coral release]

Chakra Nature Ninja Points:

Jutsu:
All basics

[d-rank]
[0]Massugu Dageki [Straight Blow]
[1]Hiji [Elbow]
[2]Ashige [Kick]
[3]Uke [Block]
[4]Jibaku Fuda: Oku [Exploding Tag: Set] 4

[c-rank]
[0]Suiton: Mizuame Nabara [Water Release: Starch Syrup Capturing Field] 33 ,10
[1]Suiton: Suigadan [Water Release: Water Fang Bullet] 9 per projectile
[3]Chakra Hankyou [Chakra Echo] 27

[b-rank]
[0]Shousen Jutsu [Mystical Palm Technique] 46, 10
[1]Chakra Kyouka Kyoudo [Chakra Enhanced Strength]

Jutsu Ninja Points: 19

Special Abilities:
-When Okinawa clan members possess both Suiton, and Doton they are capable of possessing an alternative advanced element Sangoton [Coral Release] instead of Mokuton. Members of this clan start with Suiton or Doton, and may gain the other for free as a secondary primary element, but must pay for any other element gained normally.

Advanced Abilities:
Medical Ninjutsu-2 AA [3 NP]

Advanced Chakra Nature-Sangoton 2 AA [7 NP]

Advanced Ability Ninja Points: 10 NP

Spent Ninja Points: 70
Remaining Ninja Points:0

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 Posted: Jan 29 2018, 11:54 AM
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Your chakra costs are off. Even if the math doesn't work out right, you always cut at least 1 point as long as you have even a little chakra control. So every cost that says 5 should be 4, 10 should be 9, etc.

Also, brunette specifically refers to female hair. If it's a guy, it's just brown. Or a specific shade of brown. But yea, brunette specifically refers to a woman's hair.

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Kagemaru
 Posted: Jan 29 2018, 01:19 PM
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Fixed

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 Posted: Jan 29 2018, 11:31 PM
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Male form of Brunette is Brunet. fyi.

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 Posted: Jan 30 2018, 01:14 PM
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You'd still need to pay for Sangoton under chakra natures, on top of the AA payment. It would start at 2 NP since the other two are free. Otherwise looks good.

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