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> [C-rank Rogue] Kai Kudo
Hitoshura
 Posted: Oct 19 2017, 01:41 PM
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I've no emotional attachment
That's an optional extra
You didn't plump for that package
Now your left with a heartless machine


Biographical Information

Name: Kai Kudo

Clan: Tremere, among others long dead.

Age: 120

Gender: Male

Ninja Status: Rogue Ninja

Rank: C-rank

Height: 5'2" or 158cm

Weight: 80lbs or 36kg

Description:
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Despite his age, Kai was embraced at the age of 14, and thus his appearance is stuck there. His features, much like his personality, have dulled with time. Once vibrant spiky hair has grown dark, and flat. His eyes, once a piercing red that could stop people in their tracks, now often sit half-glazed as if they barely see the world anymore. As for his clothing, they are usually dark and loose fitting. Anything that can hide most of his body and remain generally inconspicuous. Most importantly, his neck always remains covered to hide the puncture marks left by the Immortality Seal.

Personality: Kai's time away had only let his hatred and disgust for humanity mellow, and become closer to apathy or sociopathy. The boy, if he can still be called that, no longer laughs or cries. He no longer feels much of anything save disdain.

Background

Jan-12, -0038
[Crime Scene Investigation Report]
A small child was found at the wreck. He appears to be healthy and unscathed. His grandparents however don't seem as lucky. What caused the explosion is unconfirmed at this moment but there is a heavy scent of gasoline. The victims seem to have been visiting their grandchild. They were identified as Obishi and Nanasai Kudo. [Maiden Name: Nanasai Dao] We have no evidence to point to fowl play but as they are ninja it is still possible. The boy survived the explosion due to a puppet in the making falling into his crib. The body acted like a cage or bomb shelter for the boy. The puppet however seems to have value to the child. Reports of crying when he is separated from a puppet of some sort have come in. Why this happens has yet to be confirmed. We believe he may have spent a lot of time with a puppeteer most likely his grandfather Obishi.
-Guibando Akamatsu

Jan-27, -0036
[Adoption Agency Secondary Report]
The boy we've named Kai is doing well. He eats all his meals and gets along well with the other children. We have confirmed his birth date after finding his parents. Unfortunately the parents hadn't known of the accident. Anyways they have been determined to be unfit due to the incident. The child will be adopted to a family of 3 including their little daughter. The daughter however is fully grown and even has children of her own. Hopefully she can be a good role model and adult figure. The parents being grandparents already have experience with children and seem nice enough. The boy still though even from his accident till now has an unnatural affinity for inventing. He has put together numerous items and even repairs staff equipment in his free time. God bless the boy... He's had it hard already.
-Lisa Aousano

Aug-6, -0035
[Adoption Agency Follow-Up Report]
The child has been doing fine with his new family. He doesn't seem to remember the incident though. Why we are not really sure. But that may be a good thing for him. He still loves making things and we have seen a notable increase in his abilities but there are some down sides. He is slowly bit by bit forgetting his previous life and his blood parents which is sad though. None the less we at the agency have decided the boy will stay here as this family best suits him.

Apr- 17, -0025
[Kai's Personal File]
This child is bloodthirsty. From the reports gathered, I can see no option other than one of the greatest sensei in Hyouga. She has, however, not been returning any messages regarding this. I cannot allow him to join any other team, out of fear for their lives. Great care must be taken to make sure he doesn't become an enemy.

Nov-3 -0025
[Missing Person's Report]
The child is gone. The adoptive parents said he had developed strange habits over the last month. He seemed to fear light and be less willing to eat any meals. There are no traces as to where he would have gone.

Jan-3, 0081
[ANBU Investigatory File]
Another family dead, and in a completely different part of the nation. Same Motus Operandi as before: no forced entry into the home, groteque large piercing wounds, but very little blood left over. The only connection between the murders is a loose relation to the now gone Misutsu clan. No suspect has been identified.

Combat Information

Available Ninja Points: 70

Inventory:
1 Swiss Army Kunai (1lb)
3 Drill Kunai (3lb)
Glass Wire (1lb)

Inventory Ninja Points: 6

Traits:
D-Rank
Cold Spirit
As a result of your distant, even cruel, personality, your chakra has taken on a permanent coldness that remains even when you are feeling happy or relaxed.

Weapon Focus [Kunai]
You are particularly skilled at using a kunai.

C-Rank
Anatomical Training
You are specially trained in anatomy and biology, and have a deeper understanding of vital points on the body. You are less likely to miss strikes against these points.

Call of Vitae
Kai has such great control over Tremere blood that he can use it even if it had been spilled previously.

B-Rank

A-Rank

S-Rank

Trait Ninja Points: 6

Attributes:

Strength: 15
Speed: 15
Agility: 15
Perception: 25
Endurance: 10
Willpower: 25
Spirituality: 20
Stamina: 10

Attribute Ninja Points: 27

Chakra: 370

Skills:

Strike Power:
Grapple:
Strike Speed:
Blocking Power:
Chakra Manipulation: 40
Shape Transformation:
Nature Transformation:
Creativity:
Focus:
Resilience: 20
Immersion:
Bladed Weapons: 40
Other Weapons:
Ranged Weapons:
Chakra Control: 40
Enhanced Sense (Enter Sense):
Enhanced Sense (Enter Sense):
Enhanced Sense (Enter Sense):
Concentration: 20
Medical Knowledge:
Tracking:
Mathmatical Knowledge: 40
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Skill Ninja Points: 20

Chakra Natures: Doton

Chakra Nature Ninja Points: 0

Jutsu:

Basic
Transformation Technique
The user alters his or her appearance to look like something else. This transformation looks and feels real.

Clone Technique
The user creates a clone of themselves. The clone looks just like the user in every way, to include current injuries and damage to clothing. The clone can be controlled mentally by the user as long as the user can see or otherwise detect what the clone is doing. Multiple clones can be made simultaneously, but each must be maintained separately as a distinct jutsu use.

Body Replacement Technique
With this technique, a user replaces their body with an inanimate object the moment an attack lands. This is done to evade an attack at the last second, making the opponent think the attack landed when in fact, it did not.

Seal Release
The user places their palm on a scroll or similar object that contains a seal. Using chakra, the user can unseal the scroll, obtaining whatever was hidden within.

Tree Walking
By focusing chakra to one's feet, a ninja can adhere themselves to sheer surfaces, such as trees, walls, cliffs, and can even walk upside down. This technique is usually used through the feet, but may be used from any body part. If this technique is known by a Chuunin or higher shinobi, it does not require concentration. This technique does not require handseals.

Water Surface Walking
By emitting a constant stream of chakra from the user's feet, the user may walk on the surface of water as if it was solid. This technique is usually used through the feet, but may be used from any body part. If this technique is known by a Chuunin or higher shinobi, it does not require concentration. This technique does not require handseals.

Mind Technique Release
While holding the Rat seal, the user forcibly halts their chakra flow, then rapidly rushes a greater amount of chakra to their head. This process disperses the chakra causing a Genjutsu to occur, and can break it in such a fashion.

D-Rank
Chakra Threads
The user creates threads out of chakra, with a maximum of one thread per every finger. While the threads are usually visible, a skilled user of the technique may suppress the chakra used well enough to render them invisible. The threads, being composed of chakra, cannot be cut by ordinary weapons, but chakra will destroy them relatively easily. These threads are typically used by puppeteers, but can be used as a substitute for wire in any situation that may call for them.

Secret Handshake
Nearly identical to the Fist Bump basic, this jutsu is about transmitting intent through the act of lightly touching fists. Instead of transferring true intent, however, it transmits a lie of the user's choice.
Limitations: Can only be used with a willing partner also using Secret Handshake or Fist Bump.

C-Rank

Marionette's Counterfiet Wiring
With this technique, while a jutsu which requires chakra threads is in use, the user may choose to alter the tangibility of one or more strings. These strings may be made entirely intangible, standard, or can be made to share the traits of a type of wire the user has in their possession. However, it is still Kugutsu or a related technique controlling the solid strings, thus, the normal traits of that technique apply.

B-Rank
Assimilate All Creation
The user performs a series of handseals and may then absorb the characteristics of an object that is in contact with their skin, possibly delaying the effect in order to touch the intended object. This affords the user great versatility, allowing them to become as hard as stone, flexible like rubber, or even clear like glass. After assimilating the characteristics of the material, if the object is large enough, the user may also sink into the object and move through it for protection, stealth, or easier travel. The user moves twice their usual speed through the applicable material.

Manipulate Advancing Blades
The user can attach chakra strings to up to 10 small objects, usually kunai or small knives, and control them at will with such great precision and power that each object moves as if the user had +10 points in strength, speed, and agility.

A-Rank

S-Rank

Jutsu Ninja Points: 11

Special Abilities:

Advanced Abilities:

Advanced Ability Ninja Points:

Spent Ninja Points: 70
Remaining Ninja Points: 0

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QUOTE (Kennyrules)
It's a bit refreshing to see this, honestly. I see a bunch of "well, if the user is able to handle it, why not" answers here. I love it. Common sense should reign supreme, not hard and fast rules that need to be enforced. Thank you staff. We of the userbase love you <3
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 Posted: Oct 19 2017, 03:03 PM
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Balance-wise, everything looks fine. One thing confused me in the background though (it is quite minor, about as minor as possible, but it bugged me as it may have been a mistake and I know I hate mistakes being left in the final product)

He's 120. The current year is 81. So, at the time of the explosion, he would have been 6...the fact that a puppet fell into his crib is somewhat odd.


Oh, this is slightly more relevant, he seems to be a puppeteer. He doesn't have any puppets though, and puppets would still cost NP, which he is out of. Not necessarily an issue, just making sure that won't become an issue later.

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 Posted: Oct 19 2017, 03:11 PM
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I was playing around with dates and timing, and that's just an error that slipped through.

As for puppetry, as he grows, he will be doing puppetry-ish things with chakra strings, but probably won't have an actual puppet. At least he certainly won't while C-rank. We'll see what the future holds, though. It won't be an issue.

I'd also like approval on this to be held off until the rest of his stuff is approved, as changes there may interfere with his razor-thin NP budget.

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It's a bit refreshing to see this, honestly. I see a bunch of "well, if the user is able to handle it, why not" answers here. I love it. Common sense should reign supreme, not hard and fast rules that need to be enforced. Thank you staff. We of the userbase love you <3
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 Posted: Oct 20 2017, 02:46 AM
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Fair enough. Approved, pending approval of the other apps as requested. If NP costs on those change, I'll come back to this, but as of right now, this is fine.

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 Posted: Oct 20 2017, 08:22 AM
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Now that everything else has been taken care of, I changed the wording on jutsu descriptions to match the new ones. I think I'm ready to go.

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 Posted: Oct 20 2017, 08:24 AM
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Approved.

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