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> [B Rank Genjutsu] Sousou [Uchiha, Ninigi]
N tha Darth
 Posted: May 16 2018, 05:33 AM
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Name: Phoenix Cry

Rank: B

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu

Description: Playing on the resonance of metal being struck, the user can create a sharp sound reminiscent of the loud cry of an unknown bird. The high pitched sound goes from being distractingly loud at the start, to horrendously ear-piercing in a few seconds. This genjutsu can capture multiple targets at once for multiples of the cost as long as they can hear the sound cue.

This jutsu allows the user to move during use and thus has no aftershock.

Post Duration: 3 Seconds

Creator: Uchiha, Ninigi

Cost: 60
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ZacDesu
 Posted: May 17 2018, 02:14 AM
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Straight forward.

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N tha Darth
 Posted: Jul 1 2018, 04:19 PM
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There used to be a described aftershock effect which I have removed.

I added movement and also inserted a clause from the genjutsu guide that says a genjutsu that allows movement for the caster can't have an aftershock.
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 Posted: Jul 2 2018, 01:54 AM
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If this allows you movement and multiple target capture, the cost should probably be on a per target basis. Otherwise, this is a "defeat an entire squad by myself" jutsu.

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N tha Darth
 Posted: Jul 2 2018, 03:08 AM
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Isn't that what Uchiha do?



Fixed the cost to match the number of foes.
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BurningBright
 Posted: Jul 2 2018, 11:09 AM
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Yes, but we need to at least present the illusion that they had a chance, otherwise, what's the point?

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