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> [B Rank Genjutsu] Magen: Tenchi Tenka[Uchiha, Ninigi], Cuatro
N tha Darth
 Posted: May 29 2018, 07:57 AM
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Name: Demonic Illusion: Heaven and Earth on Fire

Rank: B

Jutsu Type: Gen

Description: This illusion first requires the target to first become a victim of fire damage from the user. Thereafter, the genjutsu can be cast. The user can re-create the exact sensation of any and all previous burns that they are aware which the target has suffered. It doesn't matter if said burns have been healed or not, however more recent burns are more likely to be believable as opposed to burns that have long passed. The most common use is to re-create the painful sensations of wounds that the user induced theirself. The user may if they wish, even recreate the illusion of the fire as opposed to just its burning sensation.

If the burning sensation being rekindled was Goukaton fire, the burning from the genjutsu is just as believable if the burns are from a long time ago.

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Creator: Uchiha, Ninigi

Cost: 65

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 Posted: Jun 2 2018, 02:42 PM
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Eh... a guaranteed aftershock is a hard no I'd say. The way this reads if you use Goukaton together with this genjutsu you can slap them with any aftershock and there's no way whatsoever for them to get rid of it.

Other than that the wording is a little confusing. You say "The user can re-create the exact sensation of any and all previous burns that they are aware which the user has suffered", emphasis mine. I think you meant "Which the target has suffered" or it doesn't make much sense.

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 Posted: Jun 2 2018, 04:30 PM
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Well the thing is Goukaton burns apparently are felt for even years even after the burns have healed. I'm looking for a reasonable way to add that here, any suggestion?
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 Posted: Jun 2 2018, 05:12 PM
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"It doesn't matter if said burns have been healed or not, however more recent burns are more likely to be believable as opposed to burns that have long passed."

Perhaps if the original burn was caused by Goukaton then even if it's older it's just as believable as fresh burns.

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 Posted: Jun 4 2018, 05:12 AM
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Makes sense. Done
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 Posted: Jun 7 2018, 10:16 PM
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