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> [Character Edit/Additions] Kemuri, Genji
Chocobocharm
 Posted: Jun 9 2018, 12:35 AM
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Kenmuri, Genji

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Removing Senju (Father) and replacing it with Nara (Father)

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[url=http://worldofninja.jcink.net/index.php?showtopic=82&view=findpost&p=125]Nara (Father)[/url]


Changing Chakra from Chakra: 696 to Chakra: 630 as a result of losing Senju.

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[b]Chakra:[/b] 696 (+200 Attributes, +15 Physical Chakra, +15 Spiritual Chakra, +66 Senju, +100 Energy of the Sage)


Removing In addition to possessing a greater life force for abilities that rely on it, members of the Senju and Uzumaki clans gain 1 additional point of Chakra for every 3 Attribute Points they possess. and adding Nara Special Ability.

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The Nara clan has a special chakra that is especially suited for the use of Yin chakra; all members possess a limited version of Inton for free, though their usage of it differs from most-they can use it to create shadows that do their bidding. This unique use of Inton cannot be copied by others. To acquire other methods of using Inton, the clan member must purchase it as normal.


Removing Body of the Sage (Energy of the Sage) - 2 as a result of losing Senju and replacing it with Sharingan (Double Tomoe) - 2

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[url=http://worldofninja.jcink.net/index.php?showtopic=56&view=findpost&p=71]Sharingan (Single Tomoe)[/url] - 2
[url=http://worldofninja.jcink.net/index.php?showtopic=56&view=findpost&p=71]Sharingan (Double Tomoe)[/url] - 2


Advanced Ability Ninja Points: 10[/code]

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Bought 7 NP

Adding D rank Jutsu Inpei [Hiding]
Adding C rank Jutsu Kagemane no Jutsu [Shadow Imitation Technique]
Adding C rank Jutsu Name: Kageyose no Jutsu [Shadow Gathering Technique]

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Inpei [Hiding]
Rank: D
Requirements: Shadows nearby
Description: The user steps into shadows and remains very still. Their body will become darker until they match the shade of the area, and their skin and clothes will develop patterns to better blend into the background. This technique ends if the user moves. This technique does not require handseals.
Limitations: It takes a full post to assume the appropriate disguise.
Cost: 15 to activate, 3 to maintain

Kagemane no Jutsu [Shadow Imitation Technique]
Rank: C
Description: The user performs a single unique handseal, then takes control of their own shadow. They can extend their shadow across any surface, vertical or horizontal, and even across water. On contact with another individual's shadow, the user exerts his will upon the target, forcing it to perfectly mimic his own actions. In order for the binding effect to work, however, the user must possess a greater Willpower than the target's Willpower. If the binding does succeed, it lasts 1 post for every 10 points of Willpower the user possesses. This technique may be split up to hit multiple targets, but each additional target adds 10 to the requisite Willpower to maintain the technique (3 targets is 1 post per 30 points of Willpower, 5 targets is 1 per 50)
Limitations:
-The user's shadow must actually exist to use this technique; therefore, it is ineffective without a light source of some kind. This limitation cannot be removed.
Drawback:
-This technique is very tiring to use; when ending the technique, the user will be exhausted.
-If the target is injured while captured by this technique, the same injury is applied to the user. This drawback cannot be removed.
Chakra: 40 to activate, 20 to maintain

Kageyose no Jutsu [Shadow Gathering Technique]
Rank: C
Description: The user solidifies their shadow, allowing it to be moved through the air. When using their shadow in this fashion, the user can wrap it around objects to physically lift them. While this technique isn't very strong, only being capable of lifting weapons such as kunai or shuriken, it is very precise, allowing the user to attack from odd angles with a great deal of accuracy.
Chakra: 30 to activate; 5 to maintain


Jutsu Ninja Points: 13

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Spent Ninja Points: 85
Remaining Ninja Points: 2


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Was told by Burning that I could do this since it's early.
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 Posted: Jun 9 2018, 05:51 AM
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In your chakra calculation, you didn't account for losing Energy of the Sage, so you'd actually be losing 166 chakra, not just 66.

Also, your Spent Ninja Points should be 83, not 85.

Lastly, I added Inton to your elements and specified that it's the Nara variety. If you'd like the format altered in some way, let me know.

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 Posted: Jun 9 2018, 06:06 AM
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Yes please lol, sorry was super late when I did all of that.
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 Posted: Jun 9 2018, 06:15 AM
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Approved and done.

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