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> [S Ranked Genjutsu] Kashi [Uchiha, Ninigi], Ocho
N tha Darth
 Posted: Jun 23 2018, 10:14 AM
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Name: Asphyxiation / False Death

Rank: S

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu

Requirements: Aphonia

Description: The user makes the gesture of squeezing as the cue, or squeezing tighter if Aphonia is already cast on the victim. The strangling gets even tighter and much more unbearable as the victim feels their windpipe completely crushed. Breathing appears impossible and the user would appear to possess greater physical control from the chokehold. The victim typically suffers unconsciousness as an aftershock effect from the perceived loss of oxygen. The size of the hand, although not mentioned in Aphonia is commensurate with the size of the target, with targets too small feeling their neck to torso being squeezed. If the user manages to ensnare a victim of Aphonia in this jutsu, then as long as the total duration for Aphonia has been crossed, the victim will feel the aftershock effects of Aphonia even if they manage to dispel this illusion before it's duration is completed.

Post Duration: 2

Creator: Uchiha, Ninigi

Cost: 120
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BurningBright
 Posted: Jun 24 2018, 12:20 AM
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I am fairly uneasy about that last line. It makes sense for this jutsu, but setting the precedent that a genjutsu's duration can be reduced if it's chained onto the end of another is a dangerous one to set, especially when hitting with the first genjutsu makes it almost guaranteed that the second will be successful.

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N tha Darth
 Posted: Jul 2 2018, 11:28 AM
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Okay then is it fine if I include a clause that says if this jutsu feeds off Aphonia, should the genjutsu be terminated after Aphonia's post count has been met, the victim will be liable to the aftershocks of Aphonia?

And take out the shortened post count.

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BurningBright
 Posted: Jul 3 2018, 09:33 AM
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That would be fine.

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N tha Darth
 Posted: Jul 3 2018, 03:52 PM
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Done that.
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 Posted: Jul 4 2018, 02:23 AM
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Approved.

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